You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

Dear sir, I am writing

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letter to provide my feedback

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the recently completed bakery

course

. Even though I am good at preparing Sri Lankan dishes, I was not familiar

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baked food items until I enrolled

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this

course

. I must say that the program was well-organized and clearly explained the process of making an item which enabled me to grab the steps easily.

Moreover

, all the required ingredients were informed in advance to be prepared with all those for the class.

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to that, I think our teacher covered all the bakery products during the coursework which proves the value for money.

As a result

of the lessons, I made different types of cakes for the birthdays of my family members that made them happy. And

also

, I could try all of the products that we tested in the

course

at home and I could share those with my relatives.

In addition

to that, I suggest you

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include an Italian food

course

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the list because pizzas and pasta are two favourite dishes of people nowadays. I hope my feedback will be an effective one for

further

improvements. Yours faithfully, TSP