You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter Describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to provide my feedback Linking Words
for
the recently completed bakery Change preposition
on
course
.
Even though I am good at preparing Sri Lankan dishes, I was not familiar Use synonyms
on
baked food items until I enrolled Change preposition
with
to
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on
this
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course
. I must say that the program was well-organized and clearly explained the process of making an item which enabled me to grab the steps easily. Use synonyms
Moreover
, all the required ingredients were informed in advance to be prepared with all those for the class. Linking Words
In addition
to that, I think our teacher covered all the bakery products during the coursework which proves the value for money.
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As a result
of the lessons, I made different types of cakes for the birthdays of my family members that made them happy. And Linking Words
also
, I could try all of the products that we tested in the Linking Words
course
at home and I could share those with my relatives.
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In addition
to that, I suggest you Linking Words
to
include an Italian food Remove the particle
apply
course
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to
the list because pizzas and pasta are two favourite dishes of people nowadays.
I hope my feedback will be an effective one for Change preposition
in
further
improvements.
Yours faithfully,
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite