sports stars are paid too much for what they do. Discuss.

Doing sports professionally and becoming a sports celebrity requires putting a

lot

of time and effort

thus

, they earn plenty of cash that some people believe is significantly a

lot

while

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this

high salary which in

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essay, will be discussed.

To begin

, why do some citizens suppose sports stars are getting too much

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They claim that their

fames

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families

works

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more than their abilities for a long time. In terms of becoming ,famous their reputations make the way of becoming well-off fully easy. They are able to set up a business much easier

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than others because most of the officials know them and can pull strings for them

for instance

, they participate in an advertisement for only

some

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seconds as celebrity endorsement or just for the photos of them on various goods packaging they get a huge amount of money.

As a result

, some inhabitants are guessing they are paid a

lot

.

On the other hand

, some others argue they

are

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completely

deserved

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for earning

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a

lot

of payment since if they want to be a well-known athlete, it will require a

lot

of effort and practice continuously without disappointment which requires strong willpower and spirits because they will be under stress. They cannot endure and overcome

this

much pressure unless they see the result of it which will be salary and honour.

In addition

, they may get a serious injury which causes several difficulties for themselves and their families.

For example

, if a national champion who brought honour to his country faces a financial crisis or requires surgery operation, he will not be able to concentrate on his practice so they really have the competency of it. In conclusion, play celebrities have the merit of earning high salaries

due to

their attempts and the risk of crucial injuries to which they are exposed.

However

, after their ,youngness they may earn wages through their frames conveniently but it is the reward of their efforts so I agree with paying plenty of payment to them.