You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should: • explain how you knew about the plans • describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood • suggest a possible solution to the problem.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to discuss about
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to our village community. The article explains the proposed plan and even my local authority was also
notified about this
new development in our area.
Development is a necessity for generating Income for our city, but the development should not harm agriculture.The area where the airport was proposed was a complete
cultivation land
and it belongs to local formers whose lives completely depend on this
paddy harvesting income and
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this
place is popularly known as the rice bowl of the state.
As the proposed land
is a lifeline for formers and taking huge land
from this
area will create food scarcity for feature generations. After seeing this
proposal we organized a meeting with all our local representatives and proposed a new resolution as,
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instead
of taking agricultural land
we requested authorities to consider the land
on the other side of the village where we have enough open land
and which is near to many industries which export their products to the international market.
Kindly look into the proposed plan once again and please consider the local resident proposal on an alternate plan to save agriculture
Yours faithfully,
Chandra SekharSubmitted by sekhar.kandi on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite