In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case?

The developments in
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range of aspects
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human life at the moment bring countless advantages helping people enhance their living
standard
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.
However
, it is unexpected that while the advances in
agriculture
, there is a significant number of people over the world troubling
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the lack of
food
as well as water.
Although
the consequence of their hunger might come from numerous factors, I would demonstrate two main factors that disproportionate
agriculture
has
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influence on. The primary reason for
this
could be the fact that the high technology facilities equipped by the government have not been fully
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for each region.
This
is the explanation why there
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various
region
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regions
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living wealthily, while others are not, even these regions could not afford the basic meal in a day.
Besides
that, we could easily realize when the development of
agriculture
is in its golden period, its products will be exported abroad
instead
of
selling
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in their own country. Leading to the fact that
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quality
food
will not be widely
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to
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many
kind
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of people, which is a
hence
that stop a normal person to consume it. What the government need to act right now is join a hand to eliminate the
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of supplying facilities to a specific region,
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chances
to
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everyone that could afford
the
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standard
food
, even
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quality one. Widening the structure and having wise improvements in
agriculture
so as to decrease the prices of
food
providing
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for everyone. In the
last
word, it is undeniable that the development in every
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has
their
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strengths and things need to be improved, especially in
agriculture
. The crucial factor is how we tackle these problems,
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our country to the
next
step
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the road of development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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