In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case?

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range of aspects

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human life at the moment bring countless advantages helping people enhance their living

standard

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.

However

, it is unexpected that while the advances in

agriculture

, there is a significant number of people over the world troubling

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the lack of

food

as well as water.

Although

the consequence of their hunger might come from numerous factors, I would demonstrate two main factors that disproportionate

agriculture

has

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influence on. The primary reason for

this

could be the fact that the high technology facilities equipped by the government have not been fully

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for each region.

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is the explanation why there

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various

region

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living wealthily, while others are not, even these regions could not afford the basic meal in a day.

Besides

that, we could easily realize when the development of

agriculture

is in its golden period, its products will be exported abroad

instead

of

selling

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in their own country. Leading to the fact that

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quality

food

will not be widely

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to

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many

kind

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of people, which is a

hence

that stop a normal person to consume it. What the government need to act right now is join a hand to eliminate the

unfair

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of supplying facilities to a specific region,

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chances

to

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everyone that could afford

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standard

food

, even

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quality one. Widening the structure and having wise improvements in

agriculture

so as to decrease the prices of

food

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for everyone. In the

last

word, it is undeniable that the development in every

aspects

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has

their

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strengths and things need to be improved, especially in

agriculture

. The crucial factor is how we tackle these problems,

lead

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our country to the

next

step

in

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the road of development.