The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019.
The given line graph Illustrates, the variations in ownership of electronic devices in a house and the number of time spent on housework in a country over the period of 100 years.
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, washing machines and vacuum cleaners were having similar trends and were the most used appliances in those days,
whereas
, the refrigerator was not popular in the initial years but grew drastically over the decades. The number of cleaning hours reduced steadily throughout the decade. At the beginning of 1920, people used a lot of cleaning devices for their homes
such
as; floor cleaning machines and clothes stain
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tech which was very much popular in those days.
On the other hand
, refrigerators had zero sales,
as a result
, it was not used by adults but in the
next
two ,decades they raised dramatically and reached over 50 per cent of sales and usage. In the same way, vacuum cleaners rocketed and both reached over 100% in 1980 and 2000 respectively. By 2019, the washing machine was recovering over the years and sat at around 72% which was the lowest among the three, as we can observe both fridge and mopers
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plated
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. Moving forward, doing household work every week in 1920 was more (50 hours) and
thereafter
it saw a downturn because the use of
the
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modern technologies increased which resulted in less time consumption for the house at 10 hours a week.
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