Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the government rather than private companies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different views about whether scientific studies should be conducted by

government

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the government

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or individual

corporation

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corporations

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. While someone may disagree, I believe that

government

should be responsible for scientific study. Several reasons are put in place why

government

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the government

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should take charge of the research.

First

of all, it can be safe when a dangerous technology is developed by

government

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the government

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.

For example

, if private corporations can take part in the development of nuclear weapons, it is extremely dangerous and they may

sold

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weapons to others in terms of benefits while

ignore

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ignoring

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the outcome it may bring to

the

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apply

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society.

Secondly

, the money spent by

government

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the government

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mainly comes from

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taxes.

Therefore

, it is possible for every

citizens

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citizen

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to enjoy the advantages of a novel

science

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scientific

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finding. If it is carried out by

companies

, only the rich can have the chance to benefit from it.

Nevertheless

, I would have to agree that there are

also

some benefits when scientific studies are carried out by personal

companies

. The main advantage may be that a useful scientific result can make direct profits so that more job opportunities

is

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are

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given to not only scientists but

also

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ordinary

oridinary

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ordinary

people. Since a company

also

need people who take charge of sale or other

supports

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support

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. What is more, it is more efficient to conduct a

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research

reseach

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research

program

by

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apply

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companies

. Less money can be wasted and more

finding

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findings

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may be obtained through a large investment. In conclusion,

although

there are some benefits

for

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to

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carrying out research programs by

companies

, I believe it is better for

government

to take

the

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apply

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responsibility

of

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for

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scientific research.