Some people believe that the earth is being damaged by human activity. Other feels that the human activity makes the earth a better place to live in. Discuss both the views and state your opinion.

The tragedy of global warming has become a crucial problem for all kinds of creatures on the

earth

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.Some groups argue that the

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is damaged by human beings,

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others think that human makes the

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more suitable for living.In my opinion, I partly agree with

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view. I agree that human activities create a better world for the crowd.People create

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of items to make the

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become a better place to live.

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, people invent the aeroplane which makes humans move in a convenient way and we build up

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of building for people to live in.Though, human

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has become much better by building up numerous kinds of facilities.

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of problems

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the other creatures on the

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On the other hand

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, human activities cause

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of damage to the

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.We need to construct

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of different structures to make our

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more comfortable.

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, it

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various problems.Take an air conditioner

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,which creates

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comfort for all human kinds,but it

causes

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dramatically Greenhouse effect which raises the level of the sea rapidly.In consequence, rising the sea level not only affects

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of creatures on the land but

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limited the habitat of humans, eventually the quality of

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becomes worse. To summarize, I agree human activities make

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better by developing transportation or structuring

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of buildings.

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, it

also

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causes

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lots

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of damage to the

earth

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,which will make the land become

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hell in the future.If we do not face the problems, it becomes an irreversible tragedy in the future.