Some people believe that the earth is being damaged by human activity. Other feels that the human activity makes the earth a better place to live in. Discuss both the views and state your opinion.

The tragedy of global warming has become a crucial problem for all kinds of creatures on the

earth

.Some groups argue that the

earth

is damaged by human beings,

however

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others think that human makes the

earth

more suitable for living.In my opinion, I partly agree with

this

view. I agree that human activities create a better world for the crowd.People create

lots

of items to make the

earth

become a better place to live.

For instance

, people invent the aeroplane which makes humans move in a convenient way and we build up

lots

of building for people to live in.Though, human

life

has become much better by building up numerous kinds of facilities.

However

,it

causes

lots

of problems

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the other creatures on the

earth

On the other hand

, human activities cause

lots

of damage to the

earth

.We need to construct

lots

of different structures to make our

life

more comfortable.

In addition

, it

causes

various problems.Take an air conditioner

for example

,which creates

a

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comfort for all human kinds,but it

causes

dramatically Greenhouse effect which raises the level of the sea rapidly.In consequence, rising the sea level not only affects

lots

of creatures on the land but

also

limited the habitat of humans, eventually the quality of

life

becomes worse. To summarize, I agree human activities make

life

better by developing transportation or structuring

lots

of buildings.

However

, it

also

causes

lots

of damage to the

earth

,which will make the land become

a

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hell in the future.If we do not face the problems, it becomes an irreversible tragedy in the future.