Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialize with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problem do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problem be solved?

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most youngsters have uncontrolled permission to the internet and are utilizing it to mingle with others.

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can cause a number of fearful situations which can be detrimental for

kids

.

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to

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occurrence after which a feasible conclusion shall be made

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in social vices is one of the enormous effects utilizing the internet without parental guidance can lead to.

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is because

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there are a lot of things online ranging from pornographic movies to theft that the youngsters are exposed to. In view of

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, if they are not controlled for a long time,

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they begin to practice what they see and become addicted

such

that it is difficult to put a stop to it.

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, it was announced that a

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boy has raped

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sister. When asked where he learnt it from, he said, it was from a cartoon he normally

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online. More so, the

use

of

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can cause

kids

to have low grades in school as they spend more time on the screen decreasing their attention span. In terms of

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, parents are to constantly monitor what their

kids

are doing on their laptops or phones and direct them from sites which are not for

kids

or better still , they can lock those sites before giving the device to them for

use

.

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, they should have a time limit as to when they cannot

use

those devices so they can study what has been taught.

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kids

who blend the

use

of computers and studies perform better in their

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.

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of these regulations will help these

kids

to be responsible adults in future. In conclusion, after assessing the main reasons and the proposed solutions to

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occurrence, I will

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suggest that parents become very vigilant and interested in all the affairs of their children.