Some children spend hours every day on smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

It is undeniable that A significant proportion

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spend their daily time

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using smartphones.

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pattern should be brought negative and positive effects. I go along with

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view that it might be a negative development for them on the whole. Apparently , Smartphones like tablets, cell phones and I-pad have a key position in order to select an activity . There could be several reasons that contributed to

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issue.The main one is

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of physical activity

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as outdoor activities. In

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present world ,A vast majority of parents because of economic issues have to work overtime.

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, registering their

children

in some classes is really difficult for them .In order to save time , buy

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devices for them .

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, the diversity and fascination of smartphone programmes can be a catalyst for adults . Since the

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been able to use graphics, music and sounds in their applications,

children

's tendencies are gone up . Despite the fact that

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technology

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standard of living , some philosophies believe that

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development has an inevitable impact on our

children

's lives.A prominent example of

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issue might be physiological problems .While the emotional and social skills have formed since childhood period,If they do

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improve their talents and abilities, they will face obstacles in their daily lives. Not only do

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smartphones

have a negative impact on their bodies, But

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they experience physical problems like poor posture. In conclusion ,

technology

has a key role in each generation, But

children

are more fascinated to use them more than others .

Furthermore

, it is obvious that

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trend has brought awful

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for them .