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You are having a party at your home to celebrate your birthday and you want to use a catering company to organize the food. You had sone excellent food at a catered party at a friend's house. In your letter ask What do they charge They contact details

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Dear Haj, How are you? It was so good seeing you at your party
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 weekend. I can't thank you enough for inviting me because I think it was one of the best parties I've been to, and everyone seemed to have a lot of fun. The activities, the music and especially the food were perfect. Anyway, I've been planning my birthday party, and I've been thinking to hire the catering company you had. So, I want to ask your opinion and maybe some information about them.
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, If you don't mind, I want to know how much they charged you. I reckon it was a bit expensive, but honestly, I wouldn’t mind as they had served gourmet cuisine.
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, all in all, how did they do based on your opinion, and do you think you will recommend them to your friends? If so, can you tell me how I can get in touch with them? I hope to hear from you soon. All the best, Kenny

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