It is difficult to experience a country fully as a tourist in a hotel. To appreciate and understand a country, a person needs to live there. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Tourism is the backbone of some of the developing economies in the world. Due to term. During term they have limited space to go to a renowned neighbourhood to visit monuments, and nature and explore other stuff. following everything by themself. A person has to do all those stuff which other nations do,
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, A person visiting another country will always want to visit its good site, he will never go to slum areas or other problematic areas. Moreover
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only he will be able to get their feelings. To understand more about their livelihood, the tourist has to spend more months in the country and do some jobs to earn money and earn a livelihood.
To put it in a nutshell, visiting other countries is easy but to understand completely their culture, tradition and other things for their living, one has to live with them for more timeSubmitted by shikha_dhingra on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite