Celebrities are usually famous for glamour and wealth rather than their achievements. Some say taking them as an example can be dangerous for young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid development of social media,

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, as the identity which gains the most attraction from

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in the decade, are shown to different generations.

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that occasion, the issue of

celebrities

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who are famous for showing money is highlighted, which causes the argument which is whether

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situation is harmful

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young people.

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, the ethical measurement for youth is simple to be affected.

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, the mumble rappers nowadays enjoy

display

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their gold chains, fancy cars, etc. It is impossible to deny that they literally obtained them through hustling

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money. What is not beneficial,

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, is they tend to write that they gain them through gangster trading or crimes, which may influence kids that they can

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be like these rappers making money illegally.

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, the definition of

success

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which is the dependence of a child’s horizon

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young

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the young

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generation is significant. Doubtlessly, being rich is not only a consideration of

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. Whereas, if

celebrities

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only show their wealth frequently

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of demonstrating how they become a famous person, teenagers would tend to be representative, so that they would think that the consequence of all efforts is being rich, and the only factor of

success

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is owning a massive amount of wealth. In conclusion, young people’s measurement of morality and the way to

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real

success

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can be distracted because of the

mislead

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of

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stars. From my perspective, it is harmful and

worthy

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to pay

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attention to that the condition of

celebrities

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showing wealth in

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an incorrect

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way.