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in some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. what are the resons for this? how can people research this?

#countries #people #history #house #resons #research
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Nowadays, most
people
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 tend to get more
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 and historical facts about places where they want to live in, and it gaining huge popularity among communities all over the world. durability and curiosity are the main reasons and there are two methods
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 individuals can find data about houses.
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 with, there are two reasons for
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's desire
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 the history of the building.
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, understanding the particulars of a building would help in gathering
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 about how old the place is and what materials were used,
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, earthquakes can cause disaster in old buildings, so
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 give more attention
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 durability
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 to make the best decision.
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, in recent days,
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 are more aware of historical values than in past,
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, individuals become more appreciative of ancient stories and they become more curious about their own place, so they can pass on
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 knowledge to the
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 generation and preserve them for centuries. There are some resources available to help out in researching the history of a place, the
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 one is keeping in touch with elderly local residents who have been living in a particular area for a long_term.
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, old
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 have heard about events that had happened or maybe they have experienced by themselves. The
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 source is that we can find solid evidence on social media or in books to find the required
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,
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,
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 can find articles that include all the details about the families who lived in
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 habitat, and the materials that were used, and etc... In conclusion, it is popular among society to
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 the previous stories of the house,
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 finding
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 which stored on the internet or in books, and
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 interviewing the neighbours can address
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 interest.
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