Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree with this view?
During these
days, advertising is becoming popular Change preposition
These
among
Change preposition
in
the
society. Some Correct article usage
apply
people
believe that some of the advertisements are using the wrong method to promote their products. I also
totally agree with this
assertion.
Many commercial adverts
display inappropriate pictures. They incorporate beautiful models that are dressed in their underwear to persuade their customers. It is unethical because the product
advertised do
not relate have with the models. It does not give extra Correct subject-verb agreement
does
information
about the product
. They are placed there to bring more attention to the advert. For example
, in adverts
which are in short movies, the advertisers always use sexy models although
they are games
advertisers. It is unacceptable because it does not give extra details but Change the noun form
game
to seduce
the viewers. Change the verb form
seduces
Adverts
like this
should be rejected due to inappropriate content.
Furthermore
, many adverts
contain false information
. They give the viewers unrealistic expectations. It could also
mean deliberately omitting relevant details so that people
are not discouraged from buying it. For instance
, many weight loss products advertised do not work as expected. It usually takes longer than expected before a significant effect is noticed on the weight, so they would either remove that information
and
focus on the results. They do Correct word choice
or
this
because many people
are more interested in the outcome, and they only inquire more
details when they have started using the Change preposition
about more
product
.
In conclusion, some people
think that the methods employed in adverts
nowadays are unethical and inappropriate. I believe some contain immoral scenes and give wrong or incomplete information
about the product
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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