Some of the methods used in advertising are unethical and unacceptable in today's society. To what extent do you agree with this view?

During these
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days, advertising is becoming popular
among
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in
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the
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society. Some
people
believe that some of the advertisements are using the wrong method to promote their products. I
also
totally agree with
this
assertion. Many commercial
adverts
display inappropriate pictures. They incorporate beautiful models that are dressed in their underwear to persuade their customers. It is unethical because the
product
advertised
do
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does
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not relate have with the models. It does not give extra
information
about the
product
. They are placed there to bring more attention to the advert.
For example
, in
adverts
which are in short movies, the advertisers always use sexy models
although
they are
games
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advertisers. It is unacceptable because it does not give extra details but
to seduce
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the viewers.
Adverts
like
this
should be rejected due to inappropriate content.
Furthermore
, many
adverts
contain false
information
. They give the viewers unrealistic expectations. It could
also
mean deliberately omitting relevant details so that
people
are not discouraged from buying it.
For instance
, many weight loss products advertised do not work as expected. It usually takes longer than expected before a significant effect is noticed on the weight, so they would either remove that
information
and
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or
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focus on the results. They do
this
because many
people
are more interested in the outcome, and they only inquire
more
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about more
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details when they have started using the
product
. In conclusion, some
people
think that the methods employed in
adverts
nowadays are unethical and inappropriate. I believe some contain immoral scenes and give wrong or incomplete
information
about the
product
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