Some people think that government is responsible for the rise in obesity in children. Do you agree or disagree with this statement .

Nowadays, more and more people facing problems with obesity mostly

children

, which is a hot topic in discussion. Some individuals claim that the

government

is responsible for the increase in obesity in

children

. I strongly agree with

this

statement and I think that

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people are

also

responsible for

this

issue

. I will explain my reason for it in the upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with, there are many reasons why some people claim that the

government

is amenable to

this

issue

.

First

and foremost, due to lack of open space basically in towns and cities

children

are facing difficulties for warm-up,

as a result

, they suffer from overweight problem.

Secondly

, the

government

should ban unverified fast

food

,

this

is because vendors are containing low-quality ingredients which are harmful to

children

to eat.

For example

, due to a lack of

government

action in Delhi, one of the cities in India vendors are selling low quality fast-

food

like

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in street areas, and

as a result

,

children

face some diseases like

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overweight problem to eating that

food

.

Furthermore

,

parents

are

also

amenable to

this

issue

along with the authority. To illustrate

this

,

parents

are not taking strict action on their

children

to eat less amount of fast-

food

instead

of taking a higher amount of fast-

food

beverages.

For instance

, my 8 years cousin's sister suffers from thyroid as well as overweight problems due to eating higher amounts of fast

food

like burgers and egg rolls and, her mother does not take strict action on her to consume less.

Also

,

parents

are busy with their hectic lifestyles and have

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care about their

children

's health

thus

children

suffer from

this

disease. In conclusion, after considering all, the

government

is not only responsible for

this

issue

parents

should

also

look after their

children

and instinct them to consume less fast

food

and do more exercise on daily basis, which helps

children

to decrease the obesity problem .