Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, others think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary epoch,

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are one of the most visited tourist attractions in any city. A part of the population believes that these facilities are inhuman and should be closed down while the advocates for

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are of diverse opinions. In my opinion,

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are meant solely for human entertainment purposes.

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zoological gardens are of the viewpoint that

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are captured in

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solely for human pleasure and money.

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argument is supported by several facts

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are confined in small cages so humans can look at them and are taught various tactics to entertain tourists. Not only, does

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prevent these poor creatures from spending their lives in their natural habitat,but

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takes away their freedom.

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, many times

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die in wildlife parks due to poor living conditions and lack of nutrition.

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, an investigation conducted on

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following the death of numerous deers in Africa in 2015 showed that only 20% of the income earned from

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was used towards the

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.

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clearly depicts the purpose of these hypocritical facilities.

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,The advocates of wildlife parks support

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by arguing that these places protect rare

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is true to some extent because

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certain species of wild

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and birds are bred and raised in

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artificially.

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is not a valid argument to support

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as the same can be done in wildlife sanctuaries and conservation areas with little more effort. Provided that, the

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bred in wild would be able to live a free life which can help balance the ecosystems of the Earth.

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the

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in the wild don't live as long as the

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, their quality of life in nature is significantly better. An example of

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is the survey conducted in 2012 that showed that the

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were more active and healthy in the forests than in any imprisonment. In conclusion, after

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that every creature has the right to live their life on

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planet and imprisoning

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right. In my opinion,

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affect the fauna negatively and not positively.

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,it would be appropriate to close these places down .