Top athletes and famous musicians today are paid enormous sums of money, and many people believe that this is unfair and that athletes and musicians should not be paid so much. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, well know

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players and

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get paid huge amounts of money for their work, whereas others

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and

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with the same or better skills do not get any recognition. In

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I will explain from an economic and social point of view why I think that

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is unfair. On the one hand, some top

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get paid millions of dollars while other

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athletes

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athletes

from the same team or category are not being paid enough;

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, those who are not paid enough have to face some difficulties related to their economy.

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, Football players from

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categories that are not getting paid as much as the ones that became famous have to afford from their own savings all the costs related to physiotherapy, nutritionists, personal trainers and sometimes

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to events; while famous Football players do not have to deal with

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costs.

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situation remarks how unfair the sports world is, and how important it will be to start recognising all professional

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, so they can succeed in their

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.

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, famous

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earn lots of money doing shows, releasing new albums or

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and advertising their careers

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social media;

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, the majority of

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do not get paid and are not recognised for their performances, because a big part of the society believes that they do it as a hobby.

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, not-famous

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are not able to develop their career and generate a salary from it; usually, they do not have any support from music studios, and they cannot advertise their work. In

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case, the government should change the laws regarding

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music and arts, and make sure that everybody has the same opportunities and wages. In conclusion, all

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and

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should be respected for what they do, because

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the end it is their job and that needs to be paid like every other career. I think that

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politicians should regulate their payments, so everybody can have an opportunity to

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succeed

suceed

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