Some people think that we should keep all the money we earn and not pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We all know that the money we earn has been partly paid to the country as tax, and
this
fact has aroused an argument that the income we make should be totally kept in our own hands Linking Words
instead
of the nation. Considering the living standards and the education, I strongly disagree with Linking Words
this
idea.
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Firstly
, the fact that a decrease will occur in the quality of our living standards indicates that citizens should pay Linking Words
taxes
to the country they live in. To be more specific, the financial budgets that the government distributes to build basic infrastructures, Use synonyms
such
as electricity, water stations and so on, are all from the Linking Words
taxes
we pay. Use synonyms
Therefore
, once no one pays Linking Words
taxes
to the nation, the basic infrastructure will be outdated soon, leading to difficulties in our lives and a reduction in the quality of our living standards. Use synonyms
As a result
, paying Linking Words
taxes
is not only for the country but Use synonyms
also
for ourselves.
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Secondly
, Linking Words
such
a style of keeping the earnings in our own hands will lead to conflicts in education between the rich and the normal or the poor. Linking Words
In other words
, without tax, the public schools will disappear soon, and excellent educational resources, like teachers and equipment, are more likely to be captured by people who have more economic strength, causing normal people to have not enough teachers and other resources that are necessary for education. In comparison, paying Linking Words
taxes
to the state is beneficial to solving these issues in order to ease the disharmony of society.
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although
paying Linking Words
taxes
looks like no profits for ourselves in daily life, it impacts every corner. Use synonyms
Besides
, a bright future can only be formed by paying more Linking Words
taxes
.Use synonyms
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