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In the future ,nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.To what extent do you agree or disagree

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It is argued that in the coming years ,no individual will purchase hardcopy
books
 because they will be able to read anything on the internet free of charge.I totally disagree because it will still be relevant because of technical
issues
 and
health
 problems.
This
 essay will explain in detail the reasons for my stance
as well as
 examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin
 with,the primary reason hardcopy
books
 will still exist is technical challenges.In order to read online individuals need to have a stable internet connection.Without ,
this
 they can not be able to read.
For example
 ,it will be difficult for people in the countryside to read on phones because of no network .
Therefore
,it will be available for individuals.
In addition
,reading on the
internet
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Internet
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 requires electricity.Meanwhile ,villages lack electricity.
Although
 city inhabitants will benefit from online reading,village people will not benefit.
Secondly
,another reason printed
books
 will be relevant is most older generations do not know how to use the computer .They will prefer reading hard copies because of the convenience
it
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that
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 comes with them.Reading will be easier because
that is
 the mode they have been using for a long time.
Furthermore
,it brings about
health
issues
 in the long run.They tend to like hard copies because of problems with the eyes in the future.
Hence
 ,it deters them from reading online.For instance,a recent study by Ghana
Health
 Services states that 90 per cent of their patient with sight
issues
 are a result of reading newspapers with gadgets. In conclusion,the essay opines that
books
 will still be relevant in the future.Technical challenges and
health
issues
 are the two reasons I completely opined to
such
 conviction.
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coherence cohesion
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancements
  • Digital content
  • Environmental concerns
  • Tactile experience
  • Production costs
  • Distribution costs
  • Digital divide
  • Digital fatigue
  • Print media
  • Credibility
  • Permanence
  • Collectibility
  • Aesthetic value
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