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In the future people will read only online and no one will buy printed newspapers. to what extent do you agree od disagree?

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Nowadays, some
people
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 commence that in the future individuals will read only online
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books
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 and newspapers and they will not buy printed materials and
books
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.
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 essay strongly disagrees with
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 statement and in my opinion, reading e-book on computers and laptops have a negative impact on
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's eye along with we cannot underline our main points. I will explain my reasons for it in the following paragraphs.
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 with, there are many reasons why individuals will not read only e-
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 and they will buy printed
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 materials.
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 and foremost, reading online is not a perfect method to read,
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 is because we cannot underline the main points and rewrite our sentences over there, while on
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books
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 these are possible.
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, a printed newspaper is cheap compared to online resources.
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, in India, the newspaper is available only for 5 rupees, which is much more affordable for
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 to buy.
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, the newspaper is handy to carry anywhere else whenever we want and,
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 we can read anywhere we want.
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, reading electronic
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 over computers and laptops readers need to focus more closely on systems and for that reason, it affects negatively on
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's eyes because it releases harmful rays which are harmful to our eye retina.
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, those
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 working in the IT sector are more myopic than others.
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, reading online
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 creates a number of problems for readers
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 as internet issues and text problems but in printed
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, no these types of problems can occur. In conclusion, in the future pupils will not only read online
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 because computer rays damage
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's eyes sights and we cannot rewrite and underline our main points on online
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.
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,
people
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 will definitely buy printed
paper
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 materials.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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