Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative trend?

Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more people are likely to decide to have
children
later in their life.
This
trend has caused some controversial opinions, in my opinion, I believe
this
tendency may give both
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effects for some reasons. The
first
reason why I believe that many have decided to born a baby later is that they want to have
time
to focus on their career and their ideal.
This
means, if you in a young
age
from 20 to 40, the
age
you have much enthusiasm
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working, and you have a baby.
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would distract your work because you have to set and balance between work and family,
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working
time
will be cut shorter than before.
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, if you have
children
early bring many
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many negative
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if you don’t have
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source of income due to you have to pay for taxes, insurance, many bills and money to take care
for
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your
children
.
For example
, my mom she has pregnant at 30, a youth
age
in her career and when she
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, she thought she would take care a few
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and after
that
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she can back to her work. Unfortunately, I am a
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children
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, so
that
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time
make she
changed
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her plan and
she
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decided to
stayed
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at home to take care
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since
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I have grown up. So
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deciding to have a baby late
also
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a great way. Another, reason why I believe
this
tendency is detrimental is that many people in middle
age
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pregnant
preganant
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pregnant
have many
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matter
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. According to many
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of
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the scientists is that women who
born
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children
childrens
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children
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in middle
age
that the babies usually
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from
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diseases
diaseases
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diseases
such
as stupid and retarted.
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, the rate
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born and death of social is
unequity
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inequity
. To conclude, I opine that matter in having
children
in middle
age
is beneficial due to the fact that they have more
time
for themselves and for their working ideal.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • prioritization
  • financial stability
  • educational prospects
  • personal development
  • health advancements
  • fertility options
  • economic uncertainties
  • parenthood
  • societal norms
  • life experience
  • generational gap
  • upbringing
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