Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Is this a positive or negative trend?
Nowadays, it is becoming increasingly common that more people are likely to decide to have
children
later in their life. This
trend has caused some controversial opinions, in my opinion, I believe this
tendency may give both and
effects for some reasons.
The Correct word choice
apply
first
reason why I believe that many have decided to born a baby later is that they want to have time
to focus on their career and their ideal. This
means, if you in a young age
from 20 to 40, the age
you have much enthusiasm in
working, and you have a baby. Change preposition
for
That things
would distract your work because you have to set and balance between work and family, Change the determiner
That thing
Those things
the
working Correct word choice
and the
time
will be cut shorter than before. Besides
, if you have children
early bring many to
many negative Change preposition
apply
effect
if you don’t have Change to a plural noun
effects
stable
source of income due to you have to pay for taxes, insurance, many bills and money to take care Add an article
a stable
for
your Change preposition
of
children
. For example
, my mom she has pregnant at 30, a youth age
in her career and when she born
, she thought she would take care a few Add a missing verb
was born
week
and after Change to a plural noun
weeks
that
she can back to her work. Unfortunately, I am a Add a comma
,that
weakness
Replace the word
weak
children
, so Correct the article-noun agreement
child
that
Change preposition
at that
time
make she changed
her plan and Wrong verb form
change
she
decided to Correct pronoun usage
apply
stayed
at home to take care Change the verb
stay
me
Change preposition
of me
since
I have grown up. So Correct word choice
as
the
deciding to have a baby late Correct article usage
apply
also
a great way.
Another, reason why I believe Add a missing verb
is also
this
tendency is detrimental is that many people in middle age
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pregnant
preganant
have many Correct your spelling
pregnant
danger
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dangerous
matter
. According to many Change to a plural noun
matters
researches
Correct your spelling
researchers
of
the scientists is that women who Change preposition
apply
born
Add a missing verb
are born
Correct your spelling
children
childrens
in middle Correct your spelling
children
age
that the babies usually suffering
from Wrong verb form
suffer
Correct your spelling
diseases
diaseases
Correct your spelling
diseases
such
as stupid and retarted. In addition
, the rate in
born and death of social is Change preposition
of
unequity
.
To conclude, I opine that matter in having Correct your spelling
inequity
children
in middle age
is beneficial due to the fact that they have more time
for themselves and for their working ideal.Submitted by vihoaithichngu on
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