People should follow the local customs and traditions, when they come to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The spelling of practicing is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that the verb are does not agree with the subject. Consider changing the verb form.
It seems that tradition may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
The spelling of practicing is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that relationship may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase For instance. Consider adding a comma.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase For example. Consider adding a comma.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
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Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.