People should follow the local customs and traditions, when they come to live in a new country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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local

customs

and traditions

are

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essential when residing in a new country. I completely agree with

this

opinion and

this

essay is going to discuss why it is important for new residents of a country to follow the

customs

and

tradition

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traditions

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of the

land

.

First

of all, I believe

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the

customs

and traditions of a new area as a stranger is beneficial as it fosters good

relationship

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relationships

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and acceptance from the inhabitants. Societies are usually noted for their rich tradition and if someone from a different

land

develops an interest in them they tend to love and see them as one of their own.

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instance

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if the Europeans visit Africa and wear the local and traditional regalia of the

land

, it is usually appreciated and they receive laudable remarks for

such

actions.

Secondly

, observance of the way of life of the group of people in which you find yourself helps one to settle in faster and mingle well with the indigenes

this

will result in being able to work with the inhabitants.

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foreigners in every country are expected to adhere to the rules and laws of the

land

and

also

obtain required permits before they are allowed to work. In conclusion, I think it is very prudent for foreigners to make a conscious effort to practice

customs

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the customs

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and traditions of the

land

in which they are residing to help build a good relationship and make it easier to work with indigenes.