A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.
Animals
are part of the world. In recent days, some people argue that wild animals
must be used by people and they must have equal rights
as human beings
but others feel that people should use animals
to fulfil their basic needs such
as food production and medical experiments. In my opinion, equal rights
must be provided to everyone including animals
.
Animals
are considered gods in many cultures. In different parts of countries, wild animals
are worshipped by many peoples in most diversities. For example
, in Indian culture
they treat the cow as worshipping god and treat them as their own family members. Add a comma
,culture
In addition
, human beings
do not have any moral ethics to use animals
. All living beings
possess the same rights
in the world and they must not be misused by anyone in society. Animals
must be treated as same as human beings
because of culture and moral rights
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite