The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

We are living in a world which becomes more unhealthy

everyday

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due to several reasons and despite

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the

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that most things have proven

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as very useful they

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have a major impact

our

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health

.

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is it very likely that

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of people's

health

decreases in the future

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, Our

health

will decrease in the future due

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that everything will be digitalised and nobody actually

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to be active anymore in order to get things done.

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necessary to point out that we

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humans

humen

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humans

are born to be physical and mentally active. That we do everything on or with the computer means we are doing everything without actually using our bodies and brains. We are in need to be active in order to be healthy. Taking Food delivery as an

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. Most people, especially young people do not go to the grocery store anymore, to enjoy the walk

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the fresh and

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some nice

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fresh vegetables at the

farmers

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market. They

on the contrary

just press the bottom on their phone and order their food while sitting on the couch watching some

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reality TV show. But not only that

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our

health

will

also

decline due to a lack of social contact which is caused by the Digital Universe. Not or granted are 'Mental

health

' issues nowadays already the most common

deseases

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diseases

amongst youngsters, not to think of how

this

will continue. I am very much of the Opinion that,

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our Children will be less healthy, especially mentally, due to

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that they are much more under peer pressure and much less in actual contact with friends. To conclude, I believe that our

health

will lower in the future

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to the

fact

that our

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ever evolving

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digtialsim will replace basic human needs

such

as

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physical

phisical

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physical

, mental and social activity. I very much think that

this

is a serious problem and that the government, though they have plenty of other things to do

such

as saving our planet, should act about it.