Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some

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presume that the

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should take measures to improve the

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of its

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. Others argue that leading a healthy lifestyle is the responsibility of the

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. In my opinion, both the

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and the individuals have an important role in ensuring the

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of a nation. The

government

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can do a lot of things to improve the

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of its citizens.

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, it can build swimming pools and parks with jogging tracks to encourage

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to exercise and stay healthy. It could perhaps charge a nominal membership fee for the maintenance of these facilities. Physical activity helps

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lose weight and improves their cardiovascular

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.

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, the

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can impose extra taxes on junk foods and other unhealthy

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. It can

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promote a healthy lifestyle through educational programs on television, radio and

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The individuals

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are equally responsible for their

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. No matter how hard the

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tries, if someone does not want to be healthy, the

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can offer little help. In many

countries

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obesity has become a major

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issue. Poor eating

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and

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lack

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activity are the major reasons behind us. The

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could perhaps increase the tax on junk foods but the wealthy will still be able to afford them.

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clearly shows that the

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alone cannot improve the

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of

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. We are

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responsible. Every one of us has to make a conscious effort to stay away from unhealthy

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, we need to eliminate junk foods from our platters and quit

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like smoking or drinking. To conclude, both parties, the

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and the individuals are responsible for maintaining a healthy nation and

people

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.