Today some people have to work away from their family. What are the advantages and disadvantages?
Nowadays, a significant number of people are migrating to find a job in other nations and be away from their parents, children and spouse. While there are many benefits to working in different countries, there are
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some drawbacks to consider.
On the one hand, many believe that the benefits from the mentioned reason cannot be ignored. Linking Words
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with, due to economic problems the poor people or some, which do not have a suitable job and couldn't find one for themselves may look for it in other cities. Linking Words
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far distance from their family. Correct article usage
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, when you look around us, it can be seen that many Afghan workers are working in Iran far from their families. Linking Words
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, when they want to progress, Linking Words
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reason is a great chance for them. Linking Words
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in turn probable has a positive impact on their lifestyleLinking Words
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and affects their children’s futures.
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action will have irreparable consequences. The main reason justifying their belief is that being with family cannot be replaced by anything. Linking Words
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, labours who are far from their province in some cases may feel lonely and homeless. More specifically, Linking Words
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change in their life leads to depression and other mental illnesses in them. A good example of Linking Words
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is children that are living without their parents and their supporter might feel emptiness in their lives and face more serious problems in the future. Linking Words
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, the one who decides to migrate should be aware of its both profits and harms. For many, the only positive point of Linking Words
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act is living in wealthy conditions.
To sum up, for having a better life some want to change their location and for Linking Words
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act they tolerate many hard conditions. To put it another way, progress in life always requires hard work.Linking Words
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