Examine the arguments in favour and against animal experiments, and come to a conclusion on this issue.
It is often argued by some people that
animal's
Change noun form
animal
experiment
should not be done while in other’s perspective, Fix the agreement mistake
experiments
it
should be done. Correct pronoun usage
they
This
essay will discuss both the
issues and will try to give an excellent end.
On the one hand, Correct article usage
apply
animals
are the
integral part of Change the article
an
nature
. Moreover
, without animals
our nature
is incomplete. In addition
, they maintain the balance of nature
. Furthermore
, they have family, emotions
Correct word choice
and emotions
as
Change preposition
apply
like
humans have. So, none has the right to harm these innocent Replace the word
as
animals
for any kind
of purposes
like experiments. Fix the agreement mistake
purpose
For example
, China has created a milestone to
the world by keeping their innocent Change preposition
for
animals
safe.
On the other hand
, animal's
Change noun form
animal
experiment
is barely needed for the
Correct article usage
apply
science
. For instance
, without animal's
Change noun form
animal
Fix the agreement mistake
experiments
experiment
any Add a comma
,experiment
kind
of practical
which should be done for the students of zoology and medical Replace the word
practice
science
as well as in the lab can't be happened
. Change to the active voice
happen
have happened
As a result
, there will be remained a big lacking in science
. Moreover
, to save the
Correct article usage
apply
nature
sometimes scientists have to experiment
some
Change preposition
with some
animals
due to save the
Correct article usage
apply
Correct quantifier usage
other
others
Correct pronoun usage
other
animals
or any kind
of life. Again, science
do
their experiments on Change the verb form
does
animals
especially when they have to discover a new wonder such
as any kind
of vaccine,cure etc. Though sometimes animal's
Change noun form
animal
experiment
seems to be very harsh, it has to happen for the betterment of other creatures.
In conclusion, we have to keep in mind about
both Change preposition
apply
nature
and science
. Both the
things are Correct article usage
apply
integral
part of civilization, we can't ignore anything. So, Change the article
an integral
animals
experiment
should be happened
in an Change to the active voice
happen
have happened
accounted
way.Replace the word
account
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