Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the education of teenagers while others argue that the effect is negative. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A cursory glance at the academic systems all over the world

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that education has been accompanied by competition. So it is pivotal to prepare children for

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occurrence. Attending in sports contest may strengthen

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's skills,

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others believe that the downside effects will outweigh

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aspects. I totally concur with the latter statement, though, both points of view will be discussed in

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vital

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during educational stages.

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, participating in

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matches may cause marked improvement.

For instance

, in many countries like Iran,

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should struggle with a rough and competitive university entrance exam considered as a determinant element of their destiny. If they can test themselves in

such

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games, it will provoke positive

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like raising their performance and perseverance, acquiring

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capability of

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, improving cognitive skills, drawing up a scrupulous schedule, finding long-term solutions and preparing

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for considerable improvement.

On the other hand

, the demerits of being in competitive situations like

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games

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undeniable and from my perspective may overtake the merits. It is blatantly obvious that stress and tension may be considered as a negative ramification.

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fact that everyone tends to attain the utmost rank and go up the advancement ladder,

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, the student's characteristics will be shifted to being sensitive and perfectionist.

Subsequently

,

teenager

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may encounter

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serious physical and mental

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in the near future.

To conclude

, I utterly oppose the competitive educational systems.

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should have a comfortable environment full of

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to study away from any destructive and stressor factors like competition.