More and more plastic is polluting cities, countryside, and oceans. What are the problems caused by plastic waste? What measures should be taken to solve it?

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Recently, numerous environmental problems appear in our surroundings due to
the
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plastic
waste.
As a result
, people's health and living
standard
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standards
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are significantly influenced by these issues.
Therefore
, the
government
, corporations and
individuals
should put all their efforts to reverse
this
trend. With the improvement of
economy
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the economy
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, people increase their demands on using
plastic
materials, including
individuals
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pack
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packing
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their living necessities, and
companies
produce
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producing
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their productions.
As a result
, you can see a large number of
plastic
wastes everywhere, not just in landfill sites.
For
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cities, the street, roads, are residential areas are polluted by many
plastic
bags which be used only once. In the countryside, a pile of
plastic
waste
as
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landfill
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site could be found, which destroyed the stunning views and limited natural resources.
Moreover
,
companies
let their factories' waste
pouring
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pour
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into rivers or oceans, without any
disposals
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disposal
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, owing to the expensive cost for them, which could cause unchanged damages to the ocean ecosystem.
Therefore
, the
government
should take some measures to limit these bad
behaviors
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from
individuals
and
companies
.
Firstly
, the
government
can introduce
the
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law to regulate the
companies
even if
which
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this
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could rise the cost of production.
Secondly
, the
government
could manipulate the market, like increase the price of
the
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plastic
materials to increase the cost of
individuals
using
it
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them
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.
On the other hand
,
individuals
should promote their environmental awareness, as well as
companies
should enhance their social responsibilities, by reading related books, advertisements, and research papers. In conclusion, even though there
are
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a great deal of
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a lot of
many
plenty of
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plastic
wastes
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waste
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that result
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result
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results
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in severe environmental problems, I strongly believe that environmental problems will be solved in the future by the efforts of
individuals
,
companies
, and governments.
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