In some parts of the world people try to find out one's own family history. Why do people do this? Do you think it is a positive or negative?

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finding out their family
history
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or with the help of an investigator.
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whether
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whether
this
situation is positive or not. Starting by looking at the reason
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why many
people
are finding out about their
origin
is that they want to feel connected with their lost family and relatives. If,
for
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someone investigates into finding their true
origin
, they do not only find their true
origin
but they find their true family. Getting to know where one is really from helps to cope with the feeling of isolation and loneliness in a world that seems to be oh so
overwehlming
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overwhelming
. We are living in a world of multiculturality where everything seems to
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and
out
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of order. Knowing
ones
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one's
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own family
history
is
therefore
very helpful.
Moreover
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I believe that
this
is a very positive situation, as it does not only help to connect with lost family members but is
also
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finding out one's own
and
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true
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identity
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identity
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If someone
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, for example,
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for example
was his whole life wondering who he is, either due to traumatic experiences, isolation or other, might
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find out his
origin
and family
history
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only way to understand his
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identity
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identity
identify
.
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He will
finally
understand much more about himself and why things worked out a certain way and not another.
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,
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repeat, is
this
situationto
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situation to
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be seen as very a
positve
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positive
situation. To conclude,
people
find out about their family
history
because it's a tool to find and
connecet
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connect
their
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family and because it is the only way to fully understand their
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identity
identiy
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identity
.
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  • ancestry
  • descendants
  • heritage
  • genealogy
  • forebears
  • family tree
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