In some parts of the world people try to find out one's own family history. Why do people do this? Do you think it is a positive or negative?

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are interested

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finding out their family

history

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. There are several ways to do so, either by plenty of

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or with the help of an investigator.

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, is there to wonder why

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do

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question and reveal my personal opinion of

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whether

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whether

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situation is positive or not. Starting by looking at the reason

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why many

people

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are finding out about their

origin

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is that they want to feel connected with their lost family and relatives. If,

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example

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someone investigates into finding their true

origin

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, they do not only find their true

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but they find their true family. Getting to know where one is really from helps to cope with the feeling of isolation and loneliness in a world that seems to be oh so

overwehlming

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overwhelming

. We are living in a world of multiculturality where everything seems to

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and

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of order. Knowing

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own family

history

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is

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very helpful.

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,

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I believe that

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is a very positive situation, as it does not only help to connect with lost family members but is

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a strong supporter

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finding out one's own

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true

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identity

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identity

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If someone

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for example

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was his whole life wondering who he is, either due to traumatic experiences, isolation or other, might

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find out his

origin

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and family

history

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the

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only way to understand his

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identity

identiy

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identify

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He will

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understand much more about himself and why things worked out a certain way and not another.

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,

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repeat, is

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situationto

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be seen as very a

positve

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positive

situation. To conclude,

people

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find out about their family

history

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because it's a tool to find and

connecet

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connect

their

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with their

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family and because it is the only way to fully understand their

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identity

identiy

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identity

.