Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.  Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Animal

experimentation

is very common nowadays. Especially in the

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pharma industry

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pharma-industry

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it is very usual to research certain

products

on

animals

before selling them on the market.

However

, am I of the

opinion

this

should be forbidden and that these

experimentations

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can not be justified

.

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In the

following

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I will support my

opinion

with examples and provide some alternatives. Starting by supporting my

opinion

, animal

experimentation

can not be justified because it makes

animals

suffer and eventually kills them. All

animals

who are used for

experimentation

will get diseases or might even die from the treatment they are receiving. If,

for example

, a dog is fed a certain,

for

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human-made, medicine over a certain amount of time

this

dog will logically and

consequently

suffer from the effect of

this

medicine as it is not suitable for its organs and body. Animal

experimentation

kills

animals

,

therefore

am I of the

opinion

that it can not be justified.

In Addition

, some alternatives could be to experiment on humans directly and to enforce more biological and organic

products

, which might not need any

experimentation

at all. If we would,

for instance

, directly experiment on humans, the result and efficiency of the product will increase. If we would use only biological and organic

products

which do not need to undergo

experimentation

, the government could save a lot of money and

this

money could be,

for instance

, invested in rehabilitation treatments for mistreated

animals

. To conclude, In my ,

opinion

animal

experimentation

can not be justified as

animals

are suffering and dying from it.I believe that

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the government should

instead

experiment on humans directly and introduce more

products

into the market that do not have to undergo any

experimentation

.