You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • say how you feel about his performance • give details of your musical activities • explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Dear John, Hope you are in good spirits. I am Jen, and I happened to attend one of your concerts held at Oberoi Stadium in Pittsburg on 22nd August. I am writing to tell you how I felt about your performance. Let me tell you in detail. Truth to tell, I was really looking forward to your concert. I have been following your Youtube channel since my college days and you are the reason that I got interested in music so much. Following your steps, I

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enrolled myself in a music school where I learned to play instruments like guitar and piano. I have been practising for the

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5 years now and have

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been able to perform at Hard Rock cafe during weekends. Recently, I thought of recording an album of my own. Luckily, I came across your program where you teach and nurture new talent so that later they can be a part of your band. I really want to get into

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program to develop my career

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. I am sharing a few recordings of my solo performance with you in

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letter. Hope you go through them and consider me for your project. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jen

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

208 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

stellar performance
captivating
musical prowess
talent
repertoire
collaboration
mentorship
resonate
aspiring musician
composition
rendition
inspirational
vocal range
harmonize
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