You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter • say how you feel about his performance • give details of your musical activities • explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

Dear John, Hope you are in good spirits. I am Jen, and I happened to attend one of your concerts held at Oberoi Stadium in Pittsburg on 22nd August. I am writing to tell you how I felt about your performance. Let me tell you in detail. Truth to tell, I was really looking forward to your concert. I have been following your Youtube channel since my college days and you are the reason that I got interested in music so much. Following your steps, I
then
enrolled myself in a music school where I learned to play instruments like guitar and piano. I have been practising for the
last
5 years now and have
also
been able to perform at Hard Rock cafe during weekends. Recently, I thought of recording an album of my own. Luckily, I came across your program where you teach and nurture new talent so that later they can be a part of your band. I really want to get into
this
program to develop my career
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. I am sharing a few recordings of my solo performance with you in
this
letter. Hope you go through them and consider me for your project. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Jen
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • stellar performance
  • captivating
  • musical prowess
  • talent
  • repertoire
  • collaboration
  • mentorship
  • resonate
  • aspiring musician
  • composition
  • rendition
  • inspirational
  • vocal range
  • harmonize
  • skillset
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