One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

TECHNOLOGICAL IMPROVEMENTS HAVE BEEN INCREASINGLY ENTERED IN OUR LIVES. THANKS TO THE TECHNOLOGICAL DEVELOPMENTS, HUMAN BEINGS’ LIFE SPAN LASTS LONGER THAN PAST AND CONCOMITANTLY PEOPLE’S EXPECTATIONS STARTED TO INCREASE.

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THERE ARE SOME DRAWBACKS TO

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CHANGE, I THINK THE BENEFITS OF LIVING LONGER OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGES.

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AND FOREMOST, NOT ONLY DOES THESE IMPROVEMENTS PROVIDE GERIATRICS TO LIVE LONGER LIFE THAN THEIR PARENTS, BUT

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THE YOUNG GENERATION CAN TAKE ADVANTAGE OF THEM IN TERMS OF THEIR EXPERIENCES. TO AN EXTENT, YOUTHS HAVE ENERGY, VISION AND DESIRE TO EXPLORE ON A NEW FIELD BUT THEY LACK EXPERIENCE. AT THAT POINT, OLD PEOPLE CAN LIGHTEN THEIR WAYS OR PROTECT THEMSELVES FROM OBVIOUS OBSTACLES.

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, WHEN I WAS OVERWHELMED BECAUSE OF MY OLD JOB, MY GRANDFATHER RECOMMENDED TACKLING

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PROBLEM BY TALKING WITH MY SUPERIORS

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OF QUITTING. I LISTENED TO HIM, NOW I EARN MORE MONEY THAN PAST

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TO HAVING A BETTER PENSION.

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, BECAUSE THEY ARE HEALTHY, THEY PURSUE CONTRIBUTING TO THE NATION’S ECONOMY EVEN AFTER THEIR RETIREMENT. TO ILLUSTRATE, MY FATHER INVESTED IN A NEW PRIVATE SCHOOL AFTER HIS RETIREMENT FROM A PUBLIC SCHOOL. NOW HE PAYS TAXES AND PROVIDES JOB OPPORTUNITIES FOR THE YOUNG GENERATION. IF HE COULD NOT TAKE A PROPER HEALTHCARE, HE COULD NOT FIND THE ENERGY TO CREATE A NEW ECONOMIC FIELD EITHER. TO SUM UP, THE ADVANCEMENTS IN HEALTHCARE SYSTEMS PROVIDE NOT ONLY THE OPPORTUNITY OF USING OLD PEOPLE’S WISDOM, BUT

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THEY CONTRIBUTE TO THE COUNTRY’S ECONOMY AS A EMPLOYEE AND TAXPAYERS.