More and more people are buying fashionable clothes these days. Does it have more negative or positive effects? Give reasons for your answers and include examples relevant to your experience.
In
this
contemporary era, an increasing number of individuals are spending an immense amount while purchasing modern fashionable attires. In my opinion, this
has helped people
to follow a global trend of westernisation which enhances their personality by wearing appropriate clothes
for certain occasions, unlike past. However
, such
fashion has also
made people
forget about their culture and tradition as they no more wear their cultural dresses, but rather waste money on numerous trendy clothes
.
Looking from a positive perspective, stylish clothes
have several positive effects. The most preponderant one is that nowadays, society members can dress up sophisticatedly according to the event, which was not very rife in ancient times when people
used to stick to a permanent set of clothes
for mostly
all events. Replace the word
most
Therefore
, the people
of the community now look more presentable when they celebrate their special days. For instance
, I got an opportunity to choose from a plethora of the latest range of suits during my brother's wedding last
year, while my father mentioned that they only wore an ordinary shirt and pants at ancient weddings.
There are, however
, some pitfalls that can easily overwhelm the potential benefits of obtaining excess fashionable clothes
. The primary one is that with a dramatic surge in the sale of modern clothes
, community members are losing interest in their cultural and traditional dresses. Consequently
, the indigenous clothes
manufacturers are facing multiple perils as the trade of their clothes
has plummeted significantly, and they have been made redundant in the clothing market. For example
, since a minor proportion of the population wears typical Indian sarees and dhotis these days, the producers of these clothes
were forced to shut their shops because of no demand.
To sum up, having put forth all of the substantial arguments, although
present fashion has helped people
dress up well and enhance their appearance while following the contemporary trend, the negative impact it had on the authentic clothing industry is indeed too great to ignore. Besides
, its effect on one's culture and tradition is far-reaching as well.Submitted by abhaygill003 on
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