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Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

#people #choices
Several
people
 argue that in modern
society
 every
person
 has different
choices
. Nowadays,
choices
 are more accessible, than two hundred years ago.
People
 have many ways to become successful. Freedom now is a simple thing for us. I completely agree with
this
 statement. There are several reasons why modern
society
 has too many
choices
.
First
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,First
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 need to say that our
society
 now is safe. Human rights are higher estimated. The relationship between
people
 is based on law and rules. Most
people
 educated, have their own ideas and views. The government quarantined school education, health care and safety
society
. Nobody thinks about basic needs if he works.
Therefore
, every
person
 is able to choose what to do, and where to live. He is free as a wind. On the other side, the freedom and widest of
choices
 might have bad sides. The availability of social media and the internet sometimes goes far than it allows. Teenagers can search and see prohibited content and video on the Internet.
In addition
,
people
 could play online gambling games and spend huge amounts of money. The ability to purchase a gun for protection can be used in criminal cases or even in massive murders. To sum up, modern
society
 has plenty of
choices
 about what to do and how to live. There are many opportunities to be successful, educated and have good health. There is no doubt that more
choices
 are good, but the rights of one
person
 end where the right of another
person
 starts.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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