Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

People have different views that which environmental issues are of fundamental importance. While some of them argue that decreasing the number of some specific plants and animals can be considered

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the main problem, others believe that there are more different

problems

. Personally, I do agree with the latest idea and in

this

essay, I will describe some opinions of both views.

To begin

with, a number of people think that the loss of particular species is a chronic environmental problem. From their perspective, there are just a limited number of animals and plants in the wildlife

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depletion of them may result in their extinction.

Hence

,

this

would ruin the balance of the ecosystem.

In addition

to

this

, the loss of some plants can lead to

deterioration

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of the vegetation in a region. Vegetation plays a prominent role in facing different natural phenomena.

For example

, in the case of severe storms, vegetation acts as a deterrent and diminishes the speed of surface runoff and following

this

it would reduce the rate of soil erosion. In spite of

this

, there are those, including myself, who subscribe to the view that other environmental crises are much more devastating.

Firstly

, one of the most important

problems

in the environment these days is global warming. In fact,

this

brings about many serious damages

such

as

glaciers

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glaciers'

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disappearance,

rising

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raising

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the level of seawater and long droughts.

Therefore

, it can deplete the water supply which is catastrophic.

In addition

, nowadays the gas and fume emissions of factories and vehicles have caused air pollution. In fact, air pollution is so destructive that may result in many issues

such

as acid rain and health issues like breathing diseases. In conclusion, while both the loss of some species and other environmental

problems

are detrimental under certain circumstances, I strongly hold the view that

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are

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crises

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more essential

such

as global warming and air pollution because they seem to cause more destructive

problems

to the environment.