Nowadays, an increasing number of people with health problems are using alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their normal doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, many
people
tend to use alternative medicines and treatments instead
of visiting normal doctors. In my view, I think this
development has many negative opinions, and this
essay will outline my reasons.
To begin
, turning to eastern remedies for medical conditions can have several detrimental effects. First
, it is important to diagnose and provide treatment
to the patient and it should not be mistaken during the process. Because in many cases, traditional remedies can lead to some side effects. Some traditional remedies are still not scientifically proven that these methods are appropriate for each case or patient. For instance
, many people
who suffer from cancer tend to avoid western treatment
, instead
of depending on herbal medicine. Moreover
, traditional treatments have been passed down to different generations without any record incurring misinformation in the process, leading to the increase in the risk of alternative treatment
, for example
, certain herbal compounds require the exact ingredients to be effective, if the administered mix up or add in the inadequate amount, it could easily be life-threatening to the receiver.
However
, Eastern treatment
can achieve a good results
Correct the article-noun agreement
a good result
good results
such
as the acupuncture method. It is a treatment
to help relieve certain physical pain. For example
, some people
frequently have headaches even every day but their doctors are not able to give specific reasons instead
of the reasons that will relate to the human environment or their lifestyle. Therefore
, individuals will use the natural method to treat.
To sum up, people
should not depend on alternative treatment
without visiting hospitals or doctors because of the recovery time, safety, and effectiveness of this
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