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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

#people #professionals #doctors #engineers #work #country
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Presently, many
people
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 believe that
experts
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such
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 as doctors and engineers should
work
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 in the
country
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 where they received their education, while others disagree with that. I have the belief that
experts
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 can
work
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 wherever they like, even if they will
benefit
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 their community. On one hand, some
people
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 think that doctors should only
work
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 in the
country
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 where they learned.
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, if a student travelled and had his college abroad,
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 he should not come back to his home
country
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 because there is another government spending its money on him.
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, he does not have the ability to
benefit
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 another government. On contrary, he could
benefit
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 both countries by working for a few years in a foreign
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 and
then
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 getting back to his
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 and helping his society.
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, other
people
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 believe that
experts
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 can
work
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 wherever they like because they are hard-working
people
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.
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, they deserve to
work
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 anywhere.
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, if there is a person who studied Architectural Engineering in America, he can design a bridge to be built in Italy or a tower in France. He can do many projects in different countries by using different cultures for the public interest. In
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 way, he can
work
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 for his
country
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 to reflect his loyalty to his hometown. So learning in another
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 does not oblige the person to only
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 her residence. In conclusion, professionals are special due to their efficiency in studying or working.
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, they have the opportunity to
work
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 where they learned or wherever they want. Some
people
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 believe that these
experts
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 should only
benefit
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 the
country
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 that taught them, while others believe that these
experts
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 should help
people
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 all over the world.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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