Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. Write to a friend, who is a professional event planner. In your letter: explain why the occasion is special ask for his/her assistance set up a time to meet at your friend's convenience to discuss your plans

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Dear Ella, How are you? I hope you're fine and still in good health.

month my parents will celebrate their 40th anniversary and I want to make it a memorable one for them. I'm writing

this

letter to ask for your help on

this

matter as you have been an event organizer for years. All throughout the years of their marriage, struggles and challenges came their way, but they surpassed them because they solve them together. Reaching 40 years is an achievement for every married couple out there. I don't have talents in

this

field and I might mess it up. In terms of experience, you're the right person for the job, with your skills and expertise, the event will be a success. Please inform me of the time and date you will be available, in order to discuss the things we should do. My contact details are still the same so you can reach me there in case you have questions. I'll wait for your reply at the soonest. Hope to see you soon. Yours truly, Ben

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

179 words

8.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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