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Your parents will be celebrating their 40th anniversary next month. You are planning a big celebration, but you are not sure how to make the occasion really memorable. Write to a friend, who is a professional event planner. In your letter: explain why the occasion is special ask for his/her assistance set up a time to meet at your friend's convenience to discuss your plans

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Dear Ella, How are you? I hope you're fine and still in good health.
Next
 month my parents will celebrate their 40th anniversary and I want to make it a memorable one for them. I'm writing
this
 letter to ask for your help on
this
 matter as you have been an event organizer for years. All throughout the years of their marriage, struggles and challenges came their way, but they surpassed them because they solve them together. Reaching 40 years is an achievement for every married couple out there. I don't have talents in
this
 field and I might mess it up. In terms of experience, you're the right person for the job, with your skills and expertise, the event will be a success. Please inform me of the time and date you will be available, in order to discuss the things we should do. My contact details are still the same so you can reach me there in case you have questions. I'll wait for your reply at the soonest. Hope to see you soon. Yours truly, Ben
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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