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There are people who don't care about their neighbours. Some of them talk too loud or make noise, while others are unsociable. What are the advantages and disadvantages about having a lot of neighbours?

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It is often argued that some individuals do not mind their
neighbour
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 and are extremely reserved.
On the other hand
, there are some who disturb
next
 door and do not respect the proper silence they should have. The following paragraphs will highlight both sides of having a neighbourhood with some relevant examples.
First
 of all,
people
 react in different ways, some of them enjoy loud music, having parties at home, and having
a
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nightlife.
Although
 there are
people
 who prefer to have a quiet place for relaxing, studying and having peace.
People
 are different and many of them respect
the
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others.
However
, not everyone does.
For instance
,
people
 who live in an apartment have to understand they share a building and the sound just spreads easily. For that reason, having a neighbour could be a disadvantage for those who like to be reserved and to have a quiet place to rest.
Although
 there are some disadvantages, having neighbours can help to improve
the
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security and to grow a social community.
People
 who live far away from the city centre are easier to be robbed, and they
also
 do not have a sociable environment.
On the other hand
, individuals who live by each other can have more support if anything bad happens and
also
 there are more social events going on,
such
 as cultural parties.
For example
, in
Brazil
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 there is a festival called Carnival which every year happens in each city of the country. To conclude, in my opinion, living close to neighbours outweighs the advantages
than
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 living far from others. Beyond security,
people
also
 have a better social life.
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