Some people think that zoo are cruel and all zoos should closed.However, some people think zoo can help protect animals. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, people have different points of view about either wildlife should live in the zoo or not. Despite the fact that it has adverse effects, there can be created a protective environment. On the one hand, when
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keep in a special atmosphere, they do not feel themselves in their natural
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. wild
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can come across a lot of other
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in the forest and either they can injure or win in a natural fight. While changing the seasons ,they get several experiences for staying survive. Even though getting their food in
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specific environment is more challengeable but accustomed to
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difficult situation.
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, according to some people, the inhabitants of natural environments have to stay in their surroundings due to getting their resilience.
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, whereas
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live in their own
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it makes them happy.
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, setting in the zoo, take away the
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from being trim. Because when they are in the nap of nature, they do many exercises but in a protective area they do not have
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chance, so we could make them an opportunity to live on their land.
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, living in the forest, mountains, and deserts is not exactly like an artificial
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. even the Safari park appears to be the best
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for wild
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but not the same. In conclusion,l believe that,
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, living the
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in a protective zone is well designed but as the result, it is not their natural home. In my point of view , if the government has to pass a law forbidding several sorts of
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in nature and all humans obey
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rule it would be a more protective way for them.

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