Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion.

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people

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reduce

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pollution

. Some firmly hold the idea that more

tax

is paid by different types of manufacturers. While

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others place emphasis on some efficient alternative methods

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tax

. In my view, I concur with the later viewpoint. Some

people

believe that different kinds of industries play an important role in increasing various

pollutions

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.

In addition

, a massive huge of

the

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pollution

is a consequence of fumes emissions. Factories produce toxic emissions that lead to air

pollution

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, a huge percentage of industrial

waste

is dumped into

water

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. Following

this

, water

pollution

is going up significantly. So, rising

tax

is a solution to tackle

this

issue.

Moreover

,

this

rule causes to limit industrial emissions and decline

harmful

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waste

. They should decline toxic

waste

and fumes due to paying high

tax

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being difficult. Others strongly denounce with

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viewpoint. There are many reasons which lead to increasing

pollution

. Not only

industries

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influence

on

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pollution

but

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,

also

people

lead to rocketing

pollution

.

For instance

, using own

cars

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result in air

pollution

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duo

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to exhaust fumes increasing from

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. There are some beneficial approaches to

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pollution

.

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,

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public

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transportation and motivating

people

using

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public vehicles

instead

of

private

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car

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are

an

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effective

way

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in

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declining

pollution

.

Secondly

, more domestic

waste

can be recycled.

Furthermore

,

government

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is better to use less

of

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unrenewable power.

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that, renewable energy should be replaced

such

as wind power, solar energy and water power. In conclusion,

pollution

is caused by industries as well as

people

and government. Rising

tax

is not the best method to decline

pollution

.