Some people regard that we ought to spend money and time protecting wild animals.Others argue that it is better only to spend it on human populations.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is a dispute that some

people

claim spending money and time on the preservation of wild

animals

,while others suggest we had better expend it on humans.In fact,

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side with those who are of spending money on human populations.

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with,the importance of

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approach to the conservation of animal species which can manifest itself in the prevention of global warming and environmental calamities should be acknowledged.A case in point is the decline of global temperature in the living areas of

animals

despite destroying natural areas.As well as preserving

animals

,we will be showing

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great protection to the natural environment which can profoundly influence

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the whole creatures.Another factor at work seems to be related to ecosystems.In fact,ecosystems involve

animals

hence

aiding to maintain balance in nature with a fewer

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for humans.It can be seen in

a particular predators

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eating locusts reducing their number.Without predators fighting against locusts would be hard to control which

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large farmland areas.Enormous destruction of crops will be accounted for starvation and staggering food costs when

animals

are off attention.

However

,there is a strong case to be made that

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third

of

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population around the whole world

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suffering from starvation which

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fostering an affordable amount of money

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them in times of need.We need to take care of our kind creating the best life opportunities as

animals

can not ever try to save humans.In fact,

people

living in underdeveloping countries can not afford to conserve

animals

.By switching

people

out of poverty,

then

we might pay

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focus on preserving animal species. In conclusion,

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although

athough

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though

animals

are considered

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a critical role in the balance of nature,

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am still convinced

people

should rank

first

giving

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monetary support to rescue them from poverty.They have

also

right

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of possessing a better livelihood which could make their life easier.