Creative artist should always be given freedom to express their own ideas in whichever way they wish.There should be no public or government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The idea that as a creative
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there are no limitations to follow and the authorities cannot restrict their expressions, recently caused a firm discussion. Folks' opinions vary on
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topic. In my opinion, I completely disagree with
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idea. I reckon artists' artwork no matter in what form should be regulated by the
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. And the
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should take responsibility to monitor them. It is common sense that an artist's behaviour can lead the public. He or she is regarded as a role model by the fans group. Many people regard them as their spiritual reliance. Especially, among the juveniles.
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, if their behaviours or artworks publish in a misleading format,
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as the content containing violent or sexual elements, after spreading by social media, millions of viewers can easily capture their expressions and mock their idols.
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, social safety cannot be guaranteed as the crime rate rockets.
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, many people are seeking monetary profits without thinking about morality. The artist group which faces the public and has plenty of potential customers can easily become the machines for them to achieve illegal properties.
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, if some artists stand on the criminal's side, and transfer the criminals' thoughts to the public, like a fraud and scam, the people would be the victims.
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will arouse public disagreement and the
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would be blamed for missing its duty to avoid the crime. The loss of credibility of the
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can damage social peace. To summer up, the
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should be responsible for the regulation of the artists' expressions.
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, the crime rate would rise and the country's authority would be influenced.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • freedom of expression
  • cultural advancements
  • societal norms
  • push boundaries
  • censorship
  • stifling creativity
  • public sensitivity
  • cultural values
  • offensive content
  • impose strict restrictions
  • creative freedom
  • incite hate
  • artistic expression
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