You are planning to go on a holiday in an English-speaking country where one of your friend resides. Please write him a letter and let him know about the upcoming trip. In your letter; - Ask for recommendations for place to visit during your trip. - Ask about accommodations. - Advice on program that you and your friend can do together once you will meet him

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Dear Ali I hope

this

letter finds you well. Sorry I have not written for a while. I am writing to inform you about my upcoming trip to England. In fact, I am planning a two-week trip

month, so I need your guidance about tourist attractions in your country.

In addition

, I like to visit some eye-catching scenery on England's islands, please send me the details of some of the most beautiful ones. Indeed, I did not reserve any hotel and I will postpone it to ask you about the best one. I appreciate your suggestion about my accommodation. We have not seen each other for a long time and I will be glad if I can visit you during my journey. Surprisingly, my trip is enough long,

therefore

I can alter my programme and visit your city whenever you are free. Do write back soon. Give your parents my regards. Best wishes, Mohammad

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