A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest a possible solution to this problem.

Dear Chathuranga, Hope

this

finds you well. It was so nice to hear from you after a long time. I have noticed, that you are seeking some advice for some technical issues that you are currently facing. I had a similar sort of issue when I was working at your division, working through the VPN makes troubles more often. So, I understand what you are going through right now. I got stuck at times when I was transferring base station traffic from one node to another. It is quite hard to explain how I felt on those occasions. I had to work overnights because of

this

issue that we have in our network. Luckily, I found a solution for

this

issue after a few months of experiments. I changed my dongle into an XPN brand. It worked smoothly and there were no disconnections.

That is

how I ended my nightmare. I hope it will work for you as well. Let me stop here, if you need

further

information, please feel free to call me on my mobile number. Best wishes, Supun

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A friend has written to you asking for advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: tell your friend you understand the problem explain what happened to you in the past suggest a possible solution to this problem.

some children spend hours everday on their smartphones why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

For reducing the case of crimes, the only best way is to increase the punishment Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that children from countries with a high level of unemployment should be offered just with a primary education and should not be offered with a secondary education as anyway they will not get a job in the future. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Many people from rural areas moving to the cities. What problem can this cause? What can be solutions?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do yoa think this is happening? What can governments do to help redace the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.