A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntary/unpaid work. In your letter •Explain why you want to voluntary/unpaid work at the museum. •Describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful. •Give details of when you would be available for work.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter regarding the job opportunity for voluntary work at your museum. I would like to work as an unpaid worker as It will add experience to my resume and land me a job sooner after my graduation. Let me explain my skills in detail, which might make it easy for you to understand my profile more clearly. I am a history student at Concordia University. We have spring break for two months and I would like to utilize
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time wisely. I worked in our university library and took care of log books. I am good at communication so, explaining about the arts to visitors should not be a problem. I am available during weekdays from morning 10:00 am to 7:00 pm. I live nearby so, I can save time in travelling as well. I have provided my email address and contact details below. I will be waiting for your response. Thank you for your consideration. Yours Faithfully, Sai.
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Task Achievement
Consider providing a more detailed explanation of your motivations for wanting to volunteer at the museum, which can improve the depth of your task response.
Coherence & Cohesion
Try to organize your skills and qualities more clearly with concrete examples of past experiences. This will not only showcase your suitability but will also improve coherence.
Task Achievement
Include a polite request for a meeting or interview to show your eagerness and professionalism.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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