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Discuss the arguments for and against raising pets.

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In recent years, keeping and nurturing companion
animals
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 has drawn public attention and sparked controversies.
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 the benefits of
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 practice are proven, its negative effects should be taken into account. On the one hand,
pets
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 are well-known for their playfulness and are assumed to have positive effects on their owners’ health. Nowadays, people tend to live apart from families for career and educational reasons and adopting a pet is advisable due to the multiple benefits it provides;
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, it can be deemed a mental therapy.
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, it enhances the quality of the owners’ life, alleviates stress, and blood pressure as well as becomes a solution to isolation and solitude, which is characteristic of the pandemic.
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,
pets
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 themselves may receive attention, care and love in return.
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, there is no point in overlooking the undeniable desired impacts of
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 activity.
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, there is no guarantee that all companion
animals
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 live happily with their owners. In fact, ignorance of basic needs
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 as space, exercise or contact with members of the same species has become a pervasive problem that may cause adverse effects
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animals
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' health.
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, it should be acknowledged that
pets
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 are being kept for inappropriate reasons.
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, they could be possessed simply as a manifestation of the wealth and status of the owners who have no affection for them. As a consequence, they may not be cherished and are likely to be mistreated or even killed once the owners lose interest. In conclusion, keeping and raising
animals
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 is simultaneously beneficial for humans and
pets
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 themselves. Notwithstanding, it is crucial to take into consideration its negative sides in order to protect and assure wellness and benefits for both sides.

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