The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The map illustrates
about
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the change in the
infastructures
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infrastructure
infrastructures
of
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University
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the University
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campus
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between 2006 and the present day.
Overall
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, there are many changes in the building of the
campus
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. Most of the old building
are
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rebuilt with modern
infastructures
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infrastructures
infrastructure
and the scale of these building are
broaden
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with many higher towers.
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that, in 2016,
lawn
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the lawn
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and seating area, which is located in the centre of
campus
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, is evicted for other purposes. First of all, the
university
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offices located in the north of the
campus
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is
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altered by the science building to
purpose
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the purpose
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for
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science activities.
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that,
student
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accomodation
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accommodation
, which is
next
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to the
university
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offices, is
broaden
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broadened
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with the
second
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blocks.
Secondly
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, after 16 years,
teaching
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the teaching
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block is changed into the
arts
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building to serve for arts.
Simultanously
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Simultaneously
, the shops and
restaurant
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restaurants
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are modified by another
student
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accommodation.
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, these figures are incorporated into the
student
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facilities- shops offices and put to change for the old
student
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accommodation at the corner in 2006.
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in the past,
lawn
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the lawn
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& seating area was the place for students to take a break,
this
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factor is eliminated and the
university
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campus
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just has the lake
at
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in
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the middle.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "besides".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words university, campus, student with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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