The maps show improvements that have been made to a university campus between 2006 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates
about
the change in the Change preposition
apply
infastructures
of Correct your spelling
infrastructure
infrastructures
University
Correct article usage
the University
campus
between 2006 and the present day.
Overall
, there are many changes in the building of the campus
. Most of the old building are
rebuilt with modern Change the verb form
is
infastructures
and the scale of these building are Correct your spelling
infrastructures
infrastructure
broaden
with many higher towers. Wrong verb form
broadened
Besides
that, in 2016, lawn
and seating area, which is located in the centre of Correct article usage
the lawn
campus
, is evicted for other purposes.
First of all, the university
offices located in the north of the campus
is
altered by the science building to Correct subject-verb agreement
are
purpose
Add an article
the purpose
for
science activities. Change preposition
of
Besides
that, student
accomodation
, which is Correct your spelling
accommodation
next
to the university
offices, is broaden
with the Wrong verb form
broadened
second
blocks.
Secondly
, after 16 years, teaching
block is changed into the Correct article usage
the teaching
arts
building to serve for arts. Change the noun form
art
Simultanously
, the shops and Correct your spelling
Simultaneously
restaurant
are modified by another Fix the agreement mistake
restaurants
student
accommodation. In addition
, these figures are incorporated into the student
facilities- shops offices and put to change for the old student
accommodation at the corner in 2006. Although
in the past, lawn
& seating area was the place for students to take a break, Correct article usage
the lawn
this
factor is eliminated and the university
campus
just has the lake at
the middle.Change preposition
in
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