By punishing murderer with the death penalty, society it also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison it a better punishment for murderers. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays,There are numerous countries around the world where the death penalty has still existed. Some people believe that execution is an immoral action and it should be replaced by

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in jail.

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others have different ideas on

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issue.

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with, when murderers commit crimes, they take the lives ,happiness, freedom and love of their

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that is

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unfair and immoral for the

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to give their murderers a chance for

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even though in confinement.

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, some of these prisoners have an opportunity to avoid

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in prison

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beneficial advocates.

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, they leave a chance for being cheerful but not for the individuals whom they killed.

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, the death penalty is illegal in some nations,

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, if someone murdered poor children he or she would be guilty but still alive,

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other individuals think

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sentence is truly unacceptable. On the other side ,

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' parents and friends would live forever with an understanding that a murderer is still alive. In fact, the closest people would suffer for the rest of their lives because of

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injustice. As long as we have

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as the strongest punishment in some countries, justice for parents and friends of

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never exists. All in all, killing someone else is a horrific action for every human.

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reason, I wholeheartedly support the idea that the death penalty must not be a legal action in any country,

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, new forms of punishment should be considered for the crime and with proper judgment in front of justice.

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